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(guest) posted on October 16, 2009, 04:01:56 PM for the story Excellent
Nice job Daz!

Was immersive, clean, and easy to read. Loved the dialogue! Casablanca references were golden! Excellent!
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Dazzledfirestar the story's editor responded on October 16, 2009, 04:22:31 PM
Dazzledfirestar Everything should have Casablanca references in it! lol Glad you enjoyed it... there is much more of this one to come. Smiley
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Nanaea posted on October 15, 2009, 09:07:40 PM for chapter #3
Nanaea She’s always been there. She’s my best friend. I wouldn’t trade that for anything. Aawwww!

Loved that you worked the wrench in. Scott as a CO is perfect. And Logan is, well, Logan. lol!

Great chapter, hun! Got more than a few giggles out it. Can't wait for the next part. Wink
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Dazzledfirestar the story's author responded on October 15, 2009, 11:00:51 PM
Dazzledfirestar Yeah, he's a sweetie on occasion. lol

Scott had to be the CO, you'll know why eventually. Wink And Logan... I wasn't going to have Logan in here at all, but he just weaseled his way in. lol

The next part... well, that's in the works. Here's hoping I can pull this off. LOL
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Nanaea posted on October 11, 2009, 01:23:52 PM for chapter #2
Nanaea Bobby, huh? Color me surprised. Of course, Clint came as no shock whatsoever. LoL!

And, oooooo, intrigue with Morgan. I can't wait to find out what her story is.

Did I mention I'm loving the Casablanca references?
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Dazzledfirestar the story's author responded on October 11, 2009, 01:26:01 PM
Dazzledfirestar Yup. Bobby. lol I didn't actually think that Clint would be a surprise, but I did try to throw a little misdirection in there. You're just too smart for me. Wink

Morgan's tale will reveal itself bit by bit. Its a bit of a tangled mess, but it'll all come out eventually.

No, you hadn't. But thanks! I'm kind of loving working them in. LOL
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