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Redsliver posted on September 16, 2012, 01:34:59 PM for chapter #38 Excellent
Redsliver I picked up your story because I am very much a Scarlet Witch fan. I like her crazy, manipulative and sexual and you hit all of those keys perfectly. I was also quite happy that Todd was never certain if he was willing to try out guys by his own free will or Wanda's meddling. I'm much more a cartoon guy than a comic book guy, and this fits Evolution very well. Marissa was good and her power was convenient without being pushy.
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Ginevra the story's author responded on September 16, 2012, 06:13:40 PM
Ginevra I really enjoyed writing this story. And I'm thrilled that you feel that I hit Wanda's key points. I love her crazy, manipulative and sexual, myself. Wink

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
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Cat posted on October 12, 2008, 04:02:08 PM for chapter #38
Cat *claps, hoots, and hollers with MUCH enthusiasm*

Oh sweetie, this story just ROCKS! I don't know too much about the Evo crew, but I could easily visualize and get the gist of everything going here and was hooked from the get go. :-)

I love, love, love the characters of 'Rissa and Todd and the evolution of their relationship. (Some HOT tongue action btw! Whew! LOL!) The conflict with the twins and Wanda's role in their conception/development had me nibbling on my nails - something I rarely do when I'm reading fic. Smiley

So, in short, I LOVE it, hon!
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Ginevra the story's author responded on October 12, 2008, 04:05:48 PM
Ginevra Wow...Reviews like this are why it went from being a one-shot to a 38 chapter fic. I'm glad you liked it so much.
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